Fiancée or Fiancé?

Do you know the difference between a “fiancée” and a “fiancé”? As an editor I’m always learning new things. For instance, did you know that a “fiancée” is a woman engaged to be married, whereas a “fiancé” is a man engaged to be married? According to Merriam-Webster these two words are pronounced the same way,

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Dashes

One of the first things I check when receiving a manuscript is my client’s use of dashes. Here are the three I look at. 1. Hyphens. The simplest dash, usually used in compound words such as “self-sustaining.” If my client wants me to follow CMOS guidelines (most do), I consult those tables at the end

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The Host

Last year I had the honor of proofreading “The Host” by the wonderfully talented T. C. Westminster, and it’s finally coming out on December 9th! “The Host” is a carefully crafted psychological thriller that has stuck with me ever since working on the story, and I’m so thrilled that it’s finally being put out into

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Dialogue Tags

One of the most common mistakes I come across while editing is incorrect dialogue tags. Remember that in order for something to be correctly considered a dialogue tag, it should be about the mechanics of speaking, not what the speaker is doing. Here’s an example: Incorrect: “Catch me if you can,” he smiled. Correct: “Catch

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Songs and Books

I love music. I’m especially fond of early-2000s emo, as that was some of the first music I discovered on my own and felt a connection to. Despite knowing so many of these songs by heart, I actually don’t like looking up lyrics to most of my favorite songs. To me, there’s something magical about

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Unspoken Discourse

I won’t say the name of the book, but I’ve been reading a very highly regarded sci-fi novel and was struck by how it handles unspoken discourse. No quotation marks, no italics. For those unaware, CMOS defines unspoken discourse as thoughts, imagined dialogue, and other internal discourse (that isn’t actually spoken out loud by a

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